Just One Point In It (Part 2)

Sooooo, back in May 2023, I won the Digital Projected Image (DPI) league at Sidmouth Photographic Club (details here) by ONE point. Fast forward to May 2025 and I just missed out on winning the league by ONE point!! And although I was suitably miffed at just missing out on the top spot, I was surprised to have been in the running at all, as I hadn’t been getting top placings throughout the season.

Neapolitan Life – Commended


The first competition of the 24/25 season started off with 2 DPI entries.

This shot was taken during my second Naples trip, in October 2024 and formed part of my ARPS panel.

I’ve always liked it as a single image, as it contains so many aspects of life in that city – the green shutters, washing hanging out, battered cars, bad parking, run down apartments, someone just watching the world go by…

The judge enjoyed the storytelling aspect of the image, although he felt there were other images to be had contained within that one picture. So, off to a reasonable start.

A Ray of Light – Commended


This image was taken during the summer of 2024 in the Barbican Theatre, during a trip with my Northern Crew to the big smoke.

The whole estate is a photographer’s paradise, with brutalist concrete buildings providing a stark backdrop for figures walking through the light/shade.

I waited for about 15 mins in this spot catching different people as they walked through the patches of light. Sometimes a great person would be coming along, but the sun would go in. Or when the sun did come out, the people passing through were not “interesting” enough. So it really was a waiting game – and I used burst mode to ensure I had at least one shot of the legs in a striding position.

I received a commended for this one too – so although not top slots, they were at least both awarded.

Catching the Light – Bronze


In competition 2 we had 1 DPI entry and I went back to my Barbican trip for a moody shot of a man walking through the pools of sunlight in one of the walkways. A little too dark for most people’s taste, but that’s very much my style and I’m surprised I didn’t get slated by the judge for not enough detail in the shadows (a pet hate of theirs). But of course he did suggest that a small light coloured line should have been used to border the image, so that you can see where the picture ends. Sorry to say that’s a pet hate of mine and I actually enjoy how the black of the picture bleeds out into the black of the projector background….we’re all different (thankfully!!).

The Bystock Pools Naiad – Commended


Competition 3 was a challenging one, as we had to enter 2 images from set subjects: religion, connected, ethereal, help me or happiness.

I had the idea for the underwater shot on a past visit to Bystock Pools with Rosemary – when taking a photo of the water I felt that it was missing a face floating under the surface!!! When the topic “ethereal” came up I decide to give it a go.

I took photos of Carol’s daughter in her lounge from up a step ladder looking down on her – the lengths we go to to get our shot! I then merged that photo with the water shot in Photoshop for the end result…oh, and a Naiad is a water nymph!

Teddy Boy Charms – Bronze


I took this shot in Weston-Super-Mare during a Teddy Boy Festival, which was full of original Teds still strutting their quiffs, suits and suede shoes. I was drawn to the guy’s hands with all the different rings and he was more than happy for me to take a picture. And I thought it fitted rather nicely into the category of “connected”.

The judge understood that you didn’t need to see the man’s face to imagine what he looked like – as a face would have detracted from the hands. I received a commended and a Bronze in this competition, which kept me in the top 10, but I wasn’t setting the table alight!

Beach Botany – Commended


In competition 4 we had 2 DPI entries again, so I went with my quirky shots.

This one was taken in Teignmouth on one of my many visits, and I just loved how the woman’s leg was so decorative in amongst the beach huts. No face was necessary, as her tattoo said it all really. And the strong colours add to the visual impact.

Into the Light – Gold


This shot was taken in Berlin last summer. The light was very intense and I was on the lookout for shadows/silhouettes (just for a change!). Whilst crossing a footbridge, I looked down and saw the potential. Again, I waited for a good 10-15 minutes taking photos of different people (using burst mode) to get the right people in the right position. I also enjoyed the shapes of the buildings and their shadows. And it led to my first Gold (smiley face!!), which crept me up the league table…and into third place.

The Morning Commute – Silver


The last competition of the season is always a tricky one, when there’s an outside chance of coming first, because that final image choice is soooo important. Who is the judge? What type of images resonate with them? What will the others at the top of the league put in? And so I have to confess that I chucked my morals in the bin (I don’t care what the judge thinks – I’m only entering images that speak to me) and chose strategically. I knew that the judge was more of a traditionalist, who wouldn’t really “appreciate” my quirkier images, so I played it safe with an image that was not Marmite. This was taken in Valencia at the Science Park and we stood around for about an hour taking shots of people cycling or walking by. This viewpoint isn’t quite as widely taken as some of the other more iconic buildings.

But the only way I could win was if the two people above me and the one below me in the table did worse than me – and that’s something I obviously have absolutely no control over. Must admit it feels a tad churlish to be wishing ill on your fellow photographers (especially when they’re friends)….but as soon as I saw Mike’s photo I knew I was done for – he justifiably received a Gold!! And so I only missed out by 1 point, which certainly added to the drama. But I achieved placings for all of my DPI images, which I’ve never managed before and came second in a club filled with very talented photographers. Thankfully we have a rest over the summer, before the hours of deliberation start again next season!

Brian Sherlow (Chairperson) presenting
my Runner Up Certificate

Image by Jo Hawes

My ARPS Journey

All cities have their own atmosphere, personality and flavour, and Napoli is no exception. Paul Hollywood felt that it “certainly has a lived-in look…a little bit dirty, but I love it”. And so do I. I got a real feel for the city as I wandered around its narrow cobbled streets and engaged with the locals.

Life is lived at a slower pace here, no doubt due to the hot climate, where friends have time to stop and chat, and residents often while away the hours gazing out over their neighbourhood. With most apartments having their doors and shuttered windows to just one side of the property, these openings are in regular use, as they provide valuable light and a way to interact with passers-by.

My panel aims to celebrate the character of the Neapolitan people as they go about their everyday lives, the beating heart of this remarkable city.

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Back in 2022 when I was awarded my Licentiate Distinction from the Royal Photographic Society, I knew it wouldn’t be long before I would start thinking about working towards an Associate Level. It was upon my return from Naples in April 2023, that I began to wonder if there may be enough material for a panel in the Travel genre.

At Associate (the middle) and Fellowship (the highest) Level, the submissions are split into different genres, such as Travel, Documentary, Landscape, Natural History, Contemporary etc. A panel of 15 images needs to be produced, along with a 150 word Statement of Intent (SOI) – 300 for contemporary. It’s critical that the SOI clearly describes what the images are showing you, and weirdly this is almost more difficult than putting the images together. The assessors go through the SOI with a fine tooth comb and pull it apart if they read anything that isn’t demonstrated visually….no pressure then!!

I joined the Sidmouth Photographic Society (SPC) Distinctions Special Interest Group (SIG) again in October 2023, to give me the support on the road ahead. At the first meeting I showed a suggested Layout to see what people thought….

SOI: The objective of my portfolio is to capture the character of the city of Naples, where life unfolds in and around its narrow cobbled streets. Young and old alike spend their time contemplating, gossiping and celebrating in these streets, amid the ubiquitous speeding mopeds. It is a city full of colour, warmth and emotion.

It was well received as a concept, but there was a lot of feedback on both the SOI and images selected. It’s funny looking back at the origins of the panel now with hindsight, as it shows I really didn’t have a clue what would work in this genre! The SOI talked about capturing the character of the city, but it was felt I should be focusing on the character of the people instead. Speeding mopeds were mentioned in the SOI – but not shown in the images…a rookie error! And as for the images themselves; many did not really convey a sense of place and could have been taken anywhere. And if I’m mentioning colour in the SOI, maybe I need some more vibrant images…and all of the images should include people. Thankfully I was booked on another trip to Naples later that month, so I could keep all these inputs in mind when shooting more material. I took it so seriously that I even learned Italian for a month in the run up to the trip, in order to ask to take people’s pictures!!

I had 4 full days in Naples to take photos and spent my time wandering about the oldest areas of the city, up and down the narrow streets looking for inspiration – and finding it! I even walked past the same old guy leaning out of his green shuttered window – no movement in 6 months!! I started to get braver by day 3 and approached people “Posso fare una photo?”…and no-one refused, although many were rather bemused. I was asked a couple of times if I was a photo journalist, and in reply learnt “Non, è la mia passione” – it’s my passion, as being Italian, they understood this more than it’s my hobby!

Back in the UK I began looking through my hundreds of images to construct a new panel….as a side project I put together a short black & white eZine about the men of Naples, which made me wonder if I should perhaps do this as a panel in black and white. I’d also spent some time taking pictures around Garibaldi station and wondered if they might make an interesting panel. So I decided to put together 3 different panels to see which one had the most possibilities, before committing to just one direction. Back to the Distinctions SIG for feedback!

At this stage, I must admit that I couldn’t see the wood for the trees – too many ideas / directions / possibilities! After talking through my ideas with the group, I realised that I kept being drawn back to the colour images and that should be the way forward, which meant that I could concentrate now on forming the best combination of images and fine-tuning my SOI. Even dragged my Dad into the process and he helped me wordsmith the first part of the SOI and even found the Paul Hollywood quote! At the beginning of January 2024, when the RPS released the Assessment dates, there were only 2 per year per category…so I panicked and booked the one in September, as I couldn’t face waiting until 2025 to complete it! Now I had a fixed deadline to work towards…

I can’t possibly show all the various panel layouts I’ve gone through since – needless to say there were many (poor Distinctions SIG critiquing all of these different options!). The next milestone was to attend an Advisory Day in Bristol, to show my prospective panel + SOI and receive feedback. On 20th May 2024 I headed up there to attend the Advisory Day in person and to learn what it is the assessors are looking for, what a successful panel looks like, listen to advice on other panels and have feedback on my own. It was a very enjoyable day – I learnt an awful lot, and in fact berated myself for not having attended one before going on my second Naples visit.

SOI: All cities have their own atmosphere, personality and flavour, and Napoli is certainly no exception. Paul Hollywood saw it as “curiously chaotic, it certainly has a lived-in look, it’s alive, vibrant, a little bit dirty, but I love it.” And so do I. I got a real feel for the city as I wandered around its narrow cobbled streets and engaged with the locals. My panel aims to celebrate the character of the Neapolitan people as they go about their everyday lives; the beating heart of this remarkable city.

It was felt that the SOI needed tightening up slightly, but was generally on the right track. However, if the focus was on everyday lives, then image 2 didn’t really fit. The addition of static portraits didn’t provide a sense of place (no environmental details) and there were rather too many mopeds in the panel. But they appreciated the style of photography and careful placement of images.

I went back and completely reworked the panel again, focusing on the inputs received. But I just had to keep the man with the green shutters and it seemed fitting he should be the focal point in the middle of the panel – somehow his image was the beginning of my decision to use Naples for my A panel. It was at this stage I realised just how few images I had with the correct people to environment ratio – I either had close/staged portraits or environmental shots without people! So it was becoming harder to fill the spaces! I booked a 1-2-1 session with the RPS and was lucky enough to be matched with Hazel Frost FRPS, Chair of the Travel category.

SOI: All cities have their own atmosphere, personality and flavour, and Napoli is certainly no exception. Paul Hollywood felt that it “certainly has a lived-in look…a little bit dirty, but I love it.” And so do I. I got a real feel for the city as I wandered around its narrow cobbledstreets and engaged with the locals. 
For many, life is lived at a slower pace here, no doubt due to the hot climate, where friends have time to stop and chat, and residents often while away the hours gazing out over their neighbourhood. 
My panel aims to celebrate the character of the Neapolitan people as they go about their everyday lives, the beating heart of this remarkable city.  

The 1-2-1 went well and Hazel could see that I was now moving in the right direction. Image 8 had to be removed due to borderline quality issues – and 7 was also potentially dodgy. Image 11 was too static and 5 not interesting enough. Hazel also suggested I mentioned the shutters in the SOI, seeing as I felt they were a key part of Neapolitan life.

Back to work again, because removing 5, 7, 8 and 11 had opened up 4 gaps to fill – being mindful of the dimensions of the images to ensure balance across the panel, as well as the colours used. Submitted 4 versions back to Hazel, with 3 out of the 4 being acceptable…and my gut chose the final version!

The Assessment Day itself on 11th September 2024 was nerve wracking, but it was so much better to be there in person. I asked Mike from SPC Distinctions SIG to join me on the day, as he had waded through literally hundreds of my images for quality control and given feedback on all of my panel versions (the majority of which I haven’t shown!) and was as invested in my success as me! There were 3 assessors and 1 Chair – at the start of each person’s assessment a vote was taken. Then each assessor would provide feedback on the panel and a second vote was taken. Then the announcement was made if the person had passed or not. The first 2 print submissions were beautiful and no surprise that they both passed. Then it was on to digitals and mine was first up. The first assessor’s comments were all positive. Then came a couple of criticisms – the whites in image 4 were far too bright (and to be fair they did look terrible – maybe the projector was running a bit too bright?) and one area in image 13 looked as if it may have been amended…so I really wasn’t sure which way it was going to go. But thankfully it went my way and I passed…oh the relief!! Out of 7 submissions that day only 3 passed – the other 4 clearly hadn’t attended a 1-2-1 session, otherwise the issues would have been identified at an earlier stage. I managed to embarrass myself (and probably Mike) on the way out, by walking up to the assessors to thank them and because I was a tad giddy, dancing about and gushing my appreciation…oh well, just couldn’t help myself! And what a great finish to the day as it was an SPC evening, so it was a joy to share my success with all of my club friends, who had supported me along the way. A fabulous end to an 18 month project…now, what shall I do for my FRPS???!!!

Uomini di Napoli

Sometimes you don’t know you want to do something until to have to! I belong to a ’52 Black & White Challenges’ Facebook group and the latest challenge was to create an eZine. I let the idea percolate a while, before realising that I wanted to produce a piece about the men of Naples, using some of the images taken in April and October of this year. Instinctively I’ve always thought the Naples’ images should be in colour, to show the vibrancy of the city, but as I began to process the images in black and white, I found that it stripped away the distracting surroundings and focused attention on the people themselves.

I thoroughly enjoyed selecting the images, processing them, then working out the best layout. The words came last – always easier once the photos are in place.

You can view the finished eZine here.

See Naples and….

well, in my case, put on about 3kg of weight!! I was lucky enough to have to travel to Naples in April (2023) for work and decided to take an extra couple of days to explore the city and indulge in some street photography. The day I arrived was the Naples versus AC Milan Champions League game at home and the city was full of people making their way to the stadium…and to the hotel next to ours, where the AC Milan team were staying!! There was much taunting (hence the coffin adorned in AC Milan colours) and a considerable Police presence. But unlike the UK, there was no trouble; just genuine fans supporting their club. Sadly, Naples drew the match and lost on aggregate…but they had bigger fish to fry, with the (almost) guaranteed win of “Serie A”, the Italian Premier League. I have never seen so many banners, flags, bunting etc. in my life – all in the blue and white colours of the Naples team, adorning every street and apartment in the city. Never mind the posters of Maradona, revered as the second patron saint of the city. The atmosphere was electric – you could already sense what a party there was going to be at the end of the football season! It was wonderful to wander around just soaking up the atmosphere.

I spent most of my time in the Spanish Quarter, bimbling up and down the narrow streets, dodging mopeds and trying to not look like a tourist! So many great shots to be had. And people were so friendly – I had lots of chats with random strangers…with an impressive level of English…and never once felt concerned about being on my own. I also took the metro to Garibaldi station, which is a photographer’s dream, with the striking architecture and orange panelling, casting amazing shadows onto the concourse below. You can see some of my shots here. I must admit though I gave up trying to negotiate my way around the Old Town, as the streets were so full of tourists….and scurried back to the relative calm of the Spanish Quarter. It’s probably embarrassing to admit that I didn’t step foot in a single museum, art gallery or theatre (nothing cultural basically!), but I still feel that I got a sense of the city and its people. I did, however, step into several cake shops and attempted to sample every chocolate cake/dessert the city had to offer – hence the extra “baggage” I brought home with me!!

I hope that I managed to capture something of the vibrant, chaotic, colourful, animated and truly beguiling city of Napoli…

Ci vediamo la prossima volta!

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To see more images from Naples click here.